On Randy Ingermanson’s blog he is critiquing one-sentence summaries from his faithful blog readers. I’ve been waiting for this, as I’m never sure if I’m doing it right. Here’s my entry for my Nano-novel, Gift of the Ancients:

“Forbidden friends must reach the ruined Citadel to activate an ancient defense and save their land. ”

The idea is this becomes your elevator speech when talking about your novel, and it gets used as back cover copy and in various sales pitches.

Would this catch your interest? How could it be better?

I’m looking forward to more blogs as I read my Christmas gift writing craft books, but we’re attempting a pretty serious chill-out time at my house for the next week.  Also coming soon, scenes from my novel. The writing sample currently up works now too, and includes comments on what I was trying to accomplish.

More soon, really.

Merry Christmas!